Snow in the Suburbs
by Thomas Hardy
Every branch big with it,
Bent every twig with it;
Every fork like a white web-foot;
Every street and pavement mute:
Some flakes have lost their way, and grope back upward when
Meeting those meandering down they turn and descend again.
The palings are glued together like a wall,
And there is no waft of wind with the fleecy fall.
A sparrow enters the tree,
Whereon immediately
A snow-lump thrice his own slight size
Descends on him and showers his head and eye
And overturns him,
And near inurns him,
And lights on a nether twig, when its brush
Starts off a volley of other lodging lumps with a rush.
The steps are a blanched slope,
Up which, with feeble hope,
A black cat comes, wide-eyed and thin;
And we take him in.
I posted this poem today at the request of ds (11 - today!). Besides being a favorite poem of his, he wants to know if "inurns" is right or if "inturns" as is in one of our poetry books is correct. Thoughts? Links? Comments? All welcome. : )
Poetry Friday is being hosted today at Adventures in Daily Living.
7 comments:
Happy birthday to your son. What a thoughtful young man, to not only have a favorite poem but to care about the details.
I really like the poem too BTW.
I found it as "inurns" in at least three other places online :)
What great sounds in this poem--and so visual, too. Seems almost playful for Hardy!
WHat a lovely snow poem! Happy birthday to your ds.
Yat-Yee, Jennifer, and Cloudscome, thanks for stopping by. Birthday celebrations took over the day, so I've not had a chance to visit other Poetry Friday entries yet, but I'll be heading on over to see what you've all posted soon!
I had to look up the word, inurns!
How wonderful that your son has a favorite poem to share!
Tell your ds I said "Happy Birthday!"
Odd to think that your oldest and my oldest are 10 years apart (his birthday was Tuesday).
Love the poem. "Inurns" makes sense here; "inturns" does not.
Inurns wins--the book of winter poems we have here at home must have a typo. Or I just copied it wrong when I typed it out for him a couple of months ago.
For some reason I remember the word, "inturn" meaning the same thing as "inurn," and now I can't even find the word "inturn," so it's very likely I replaced it without thinking. Nope, just checked--the editor of Winter Poems was under the same impression as I, evidently!
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